Audience feedback On Thriller

After the screening of our thriller and handing out the questionnaires, the class gave us feedback on what they liked about out thriller and what they thought we could improve. So it it was a mixture of compliments and criticism.

Many of them said that it was confusing at first as they did not know what was going on but that mystery wanted them to keep watching the film to know what is going to happen next. They liked that the thriller did not reveal everything at once. However some said they would have liked it if there was more dialogue included and also if the editing was past faced so that it has some elements of thriller conventions. But over all it was good feedback as were complimented on good cinematography and soundtrack.

Rough Cut

Storyboard

This is our story board!

1st photo: You can see the teacher teaching a class and 2 girls sitting down listening.
2nd photo: Then one of the girls pick up her phone and start texting.
3rd photo: The girl with the phone gets a message from her 'drug dealer'.
4th photo: Then a girl walks in who seems to be the girl who's texting best friend.
5th photo: As  they are sitting chatting the girl gets a phone call.
6th photo: She then asks the teacher if she can leave the class.
7th photo: she is waiting by the stairs looking worried.
8th photo: then someone comes over who is her 'drug dealer'
9th photo: the girl explains how she doesn't have the money to give to the drug dealer.
10th photo: Then they start fighting at the top of the stairs.
11th photo: The 'drug dealer' pushes her down the stairs and happily walks away.
12th photo: her best friend, the other girl and teacher come out of the classroom and see what happened.