Screening

We showed the class our thriller and as you can see there are questionnaires in front of them about the thriller that they have to fill in and tell us what they thought about our film.

Audience feedback on rough cut

Damola Oyekanni
It was interesting but it could be longer. I enjoyed it because it created a suspenseful atmosphere and grabs the viewers attention.


Tyler Forde:

"I liked the rough cut because you can see clearly what is going on and what they're trying to show, i like the way they have used over the shoulder shots and not broken the 180 degree rule. I'd like the see the final outcome of the thriller because so far the rough cut has shown a lot of mystery, grabbing my attention, However to improve they could use a wider variety of shots"

Editing 2

This is the editing i was doing where i was adjusting the sound and adding in titles. Making sure that the diegetic sounds can be heard over the sound track if it needs to. Also working on my ident.

Editing 1

This is the thriller that i was editing for the day . 

This is the process of looking at all the footage during the making of the film  then placing the footage in the right order of what they should be played in. During this process I also cut out what we do not need and are able to move the footage around and change the type of sounds that happen during this stage.

Filming 1

This is my team and I filming our classroom scene. In the first photo is of the camerawoman(Emily) Filming and me next to her observing what she does and directing our this particular scene should be shot.

Preliminary Task & Evaluation

In this course work thriller we told a story about how a girl who owes money to a woman is being chased down by her because she isn't able to pay her back which resulted in her death.



This gif here shows the match on match action with her opening the door on the outside and shows her going inside

This gif here shows the shot/ reverse shot which is used for conversations or arguments between two characters and is very effective as it shows the emotions of both characters as they both talk.

This gif here shows the 180 degree rule bring intact and not being broken. We see both characters on the same sides of the character not being moved from their previous position therefore the audience do not get confused. 

This gif shows the eye line match. Where it shows the message on the phone then cuts to her looking at the message on the phone.



I think that we used and followed all the techniques that we could and i do not see anything wrong with the work.

The positives about this is that we were able to include all the editing techniques that were told to which is the main priority of this coursework. 

However what we could have done to improve this course work is the camera work that was done, other than that I think we did a good work seen as this is the first time